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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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ur usual touches that define ur works appear here...which is great..but theres a lot of details that u need to watchout for in the next deviations...and dont think am bringing u down or anything i just want u to be better...
u did a nice job on the lighting on the bottom but i can see u tried to give the illusion that theres lighting between the clouds above as well...and u didnt want them to be very clear like the one in the bottom...but the result was they r too little to be noticed....lighting is supposed to be strong and bold...for everyone to see...
and about the shadow on the water...shadows are normaly tricky....and sometimes u try to add shadows cuz u want to take care of little details...but trust me on this...sometimes u dont want to have shadows in ur artwork...but if u would like to do it here anyway reduce its opacity more...and if u wanna talk shadows the whole rock shouldnt have a white glow on them or dodged part like this one here ( the one shes standing on)
and about the light source...here the light is coming from her other side...the side that we dont see...so the model shouldnt have a really bright sun light on her like that...cuz all the light is coming from a totally different angle...
i wish u good luck in the contest
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